This simple 5-point checklist is a useful tool you can use as
you write a headline (to keep yourself on track) and again after you write it
(as a check-up for your newly-minted headline.)
The checklist works well for blog post titles, article headings, email subject lines, web page meta titles, subheads, image captions … pretty much any kind of headline.
This self-check is an important step in the writing process. Those who read your headline will decide within an estimated 5 – 10 seconds whether or not to continue reading the rest of the piece.
Yowzers. That’s not a lot of time!
If your headline does not get clearance from each item on the checklist, then rework it. Then run it through the list again until you are satisfied.
Identify the benefit you see in the headline. If you’re not
able to do this, go back to the drawing board. The content of the piece is tied
to this benefit and unpacks this benefit, but the headline must spotlight it. You
must be able to identify the benefit from the headline content as it stands by
Identify the one point you see in the headline. If the point
is fuzzy – or if you have more than one point – it’s time to slash and edit.
Too many points or no point muddies the waters for your reader.
What kinds of details does your headline convey: numbers, facts, statistics, descriptors that appeal to the senses, a deadline?
Here is an example. I first named this post “Checklist to Use When You Write a Headline.” It communicated a benefit (a practical tool a writer can use as a self-check) and one point (“do this when you write a headline.”) But it lacked specificity. So I added just two words (“5-Point”) at the beginning: “5-Point Checklist to Use When You Write a Headline.”
There are all kinds of ways your headline can capture the reader’s interest. Does it offer an unusual piece of news, useful information, intriguing explanation, or startling statement? (Here is a list of different ways a headline can grab attention.)
Check the headline’s 1) word count 2) reading level. Adjust accordingly!
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